A Better Blue Line

[chicagowineguy]

Ok so the first take was awful...this one's better, I think.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7708221

 

[Dr. Spivey]

It was good the first time. Even better now. The lyrics stand out more this way.

Great songwriting.

 

[chicagowineguy]

Thank you, sir!

 

[Appalachian Blues]

I felt like I was riding the Blue Line. Thank you for sharing your gift.

 

[kitniyatran]

Ooh, that's good 8) . Had to turn the volume all the way up, though. :roll:

 

[chicagowineguy]

Sorry about the volume problem--I always listen to the playback thru headphones so I'm not sure how it sounds on the desktop speakers. Anyway, I'm grateful for the positive feedback...I'm happy with the chorus going back and forth between G# and C#m